MY UNBRON SON

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MY UNBRON SON

I`VE BEEN UP AND IVE BEEN DOWN,
I`VE BEEN TOSSED AND I`VE BEEN THROWN AROUND,
SOMETIMES I CRY,
OTHER TIMES I JUST DIE,
BUT I TRY TO KEEP GOING AN THATS NO LIE,
LIFE REALLY HAS NO MEANING NOR DOSE IT HAVE ANY JOY,
CAUSE I REALLY WANT A BABY BOY,
BUT NOW I SEE THAT HE MIGHT HAVE MORE FUN WITH SOMEONE ELSE OTHER THAN ME,
I FEEL AS IF I FAILED AND IM NOT ALL I CAN BE.

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Blueroad commented on MY UNBRON SON

10-12-2009

I believe it's really a beautiful poem. And, the title is a poem in its own turn!

butterfly62463 commented on MY UNBRON SON

10-12-2009

excellent again,I understand and it has touch my heart I know how you feel cause it happened to me too.

freespirit75 commented on MY UNBRON SON

09-30-2009

this poem was beautiful and it made me think, thank u for the words.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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