WHAT DO I SEE?

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  • Happiness

    WHAT DO I SEE?

    I SEE LOVE, I SEE JOY,
    I SEE A CHILD PLAYING WITH HIS TOY,
    WHAT DO I SEE?
    I SEE A LAUGHTER, I SEE A TEAR,
    I SEE WE ALL HAVE SOMETHING TO FEAR,
    WHAT DO I SEE?
    I SEE PAIN BUT I ALSO SEE A WAR,
    WHICH CAN ALSO LEAD TO A CLOSING
    DOOR,
    WHAT DO I SEE?
    I SEE WHATCAN AN WILL BE,
    A BETTER PLACE FOR YOU AND ME.

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    GentleT commented on WHAT DO I SEE?

    06-04-2009

    Your poem is left to the readers determination. From a christian point of view I see hope of ascending to the heaven's.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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