NEED

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    NEED

    Put your hand in mine.

    Walk with me a while.

    Who are you?

    What do you believe in?

    What do you love?

    What do you hate?

    How do you love?

    Can you bear the thought of a loveless life?

    Do you want this as much as I do?

    Would you roam the earth as a spirit to look for me if you died before me?

    Can you take me away with you into a world of endless adoration and power?

    Can we sneak away in the night and love eachother?

    Can you take me in your arms and pull me closer to you...?

    I want you.

    Do you want me to?.................

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    HarverTomsson commented on NEED

    12-28-2010

    I'm with Artie on the questions. But I like the free, crisp style. Harv
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    Tempestlady commented on NEED

    12-28-2010

    Would it be so easy if we all had the answers to those timeless questions. Love the light flowing fel of this one. 10 from me...Write on....
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    Artie commented on NEED

    12-27-2010

    You ask some good questions. I wonder what your answers would be - 10 from me
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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