the run.

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the run.

Years of empty faith filled with tortured truth.

I stare into the fog ahead wondering if I will ever truly find you.

I wonder sometimes if you even know yourself, and better yet do you know the person who has helped you all this time?

Year after year month after month a drop of blood, some sweat and many tears, yet never enough.

Fighting, biting with tooth, scratching with 10 nails, these long black corridors are filled with loud piercing wind chymes.


Finally when it all stopped for a moment, I put my lips so close to your ear and whisperd, My love my dear I want to call your bluff.

You looked spitefully into my eyes then pushed me aside. Eyes wide open you ran through the dark castle of fear, and hit your wall of lies.


Please don't .. you begged and glanced down at your feet that soap box had vanished, victory was mine.

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Beetle726 commented on the run.

11-25-2009

As much as you helped yourself, another you could not help see. Your words and feelings are very deep. You see much more than the average person. Your insight and passion are incredible. Well written and keep up the good work!

Phoenix9 commented on the run.

11-21-2009

very deep and well written, very good...............................

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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alldreamz’s Poems (57)

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Thoughts. 0
A request. 0
Irony 3
The Love Blossom 1
You are here. 0
pulling away 0
SALVATION 1
The statement 0
The last letter. 0
All is not lost 0
The call of the desperate lover 0
wonder. 0
minutes in time. 0
Born out of scars 2
unfaithful lover. 2
Letter to my ..lover? 0
Miracle dream 1
Fire in the sky 0
There is always hope in you. 1
The rambling of a loser. 0
The end. (Doomsday proclamation) 2
Giving in to the void 0
Never again, never the same. 0
Predicament 0
Conflict of the tri part being. 0
The question. 0
.. thoughts and such 1
Who is then? 0
Messenger moon 2
NEED 4
Beautiful power. 2
The random thoughts of an unseen lover. 1
stuck 2
Numb is bliss. 1
Stranger. 0
An angel's love a stranger's promise. 0
The most dangerous safe place 1
Limbo 0
Golden cage. 0
Last night. 1
twisted worlds 2
My constant 0
.....wake up 2
The fairy tale fever 1
A past life 0
The Rambling Lover 0
Snowwhite's mirror. 3
Everything everywhere then.. I am sad. 0
Dialouge with God. 3
The six senses of truth. 2
The sarcastic Ocean and the Light 0
the run. 2
Scatter 1
Chosen, Shadow, and the void. 1
The Lion and the viking. 1
Not okay. 1
"Stitches for fun" 2