never shall i die

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    never shall i die
    the world is chaning and no tfor the better
    but my wisodo flows theough my marrow
    my laughter etched in the lines of my face
    my joy and sorrow walk hand in hand
    for my years are many, but i am not old
    my body creaks and cracks, but still i can praise
    yes one day i shall die, but to day is not that day
    long after my bones have turned to dust
    i will live on
    for i have place my feet in the soft earth
    i have held m childeren close
    and told my grand child my life
    so before i go let me part this secret
    for this is the sexret of life!
    life is full of trials and then when die
    so throw up ytour hands and find freedom
    or you will never truly live

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    MysticFire commented on never shall i die

    05-15-2009

    you have some typos in here, even yet very well done, I look forward to future reads of yours and please have a look at mine and give me some critiques as you see them, have a great day....*Hugs*
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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