Nobody's Home

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    I wrote this for my brother Rich when he was going through a tough time in his life.

    Nobody's Home

    Did you ever have one of those days
    When nothing seemed to go your way
    No matter how hard you try
    You can't stop the flow from your eye
    Enraged and wounded, mixed emotions inside you
    Feelings of emptiness, lost, and confused
    No one to turn to, you're left all alone
    No where to run to, nobody's home

    Did you ever have one of those times
    When the worlds got you blind
    Tear stained pillow and a torn heart
    Was all that was left, now you're falling apart
    You stare down an empty street, where do you go?
    Answers to questions you've longed to know
    No one to turn to, you're left all alone
    Nowhere to run to, nobody's home...

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    Dovier8 commented on Nobody's Home

    08-28-2009

    I think in all of our lives, we have had this feeling - but of course that when we reach for that wisdom and strength to hang on in there - the morning will change everything. Great work Nohea517 Dovier8

    Nohea517

    08/29/2009

    Thank you!!

    poetrybuff commented on Nobody's Home

    08-23-2009

    That's the kind of poem that we all have it in us to write, because we've all been there. Glad you wrote it. Beautiful.

    Nohea517

    08/24/2009

    Thank you for your comment.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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