NOTIFICATION

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    NOTIFICATION

    NOTIFICATION
    He left home one bright spring day
    So young and free of sin
    But needn’t worry where he’s gone
    The Army took him in.

    He was trained to shoot a gun
    To throw grenades and such
    Then "Twas sent to Afghanistan
    His life not worth so much.

    His parents got the telegram
    The letter trimmed in black
    With wording plain and simple
    "Your son’s not coming back."


    I peer over the edge,seeing nothing
    Eyes and ears wont to describe
    What is before me
    The ground gives way beneath my feet
    Dropping into the abyss of no return
    Time has been a blur since I’ve been here
    Everything has blurred, save the reality
    That I am alone.

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    Lolee commented on NOTIFICATION

    09-17-2009

    This is really a great poem...and so sad. I don't ever want to know what that is like. I am sorry for your loss. The ultimate price. War is such a horrible reality.

    drjekyll

    09/18/2009

    The last stanza is actually a different poem that has now title. This one, fortunately, isn't autobiographical. My youngest son, who is 30, as served 3 tours in Iraq and come back safely. I wrote this one about Vietnam and changed it to Afghanistan before I uploaded it here.

    drjekyll

    09/18/2009

    The last stanza is actually a different poem that has now title. This one, fortunately, isn't autobiographical. My youngest son, who is 30, as served 3 tours in Iraq and come back safely. I wrote this one about Vietnam and changed it to Afghanistan before I uploaded it here.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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