Now she is free...

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it was a bad day and this helped me relive my stress

Now she is free...

she was alone on a very cold day
no one to call and no one to hold
she was alone
she loved someone but she messed up once
he didnt want her back, he didnt want her at all
she was alone
her family looked down on her
and her brothers would laugh in her face
she was alone
she had friends but they just complained
her best friend had left her to waste away
she was alone
she went fo a walk to the beach to just lay
when she got an idea on how to live again
she was alone
she walked off the peer in winter
allowing the waves to eat her soul
she was alone
them people didnt know what they did
or how they crushed her
but now she was free

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EmoAlexis commented on Now she is free...

11-18-2009

real tiny words. I think it would be better if they were bigger... But it is real good.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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