On my mind......

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    This was my try at a 1950 ish type of song style.

    On my mind......

    "On my mind.....".

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, I been thinking about you.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, about the love, that was true.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo, sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, I just cant keep my mind, off the love that I knew.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, I just cant help thinking, about you.

    I know all the words you said.

    And how you feel inside.

    But, my thoughts I cant lock away and hide.

    If I didnt tell you how I feel, if would be as if I lied.

    Im still in love with you...

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo. My heart still belongs, to you.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, Thats one thing that will always be true.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, Theres noone elses love I would have it knew.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, Im still in love, with you.

    Will you please, give it another chance?

    Come back on the dance floor and give me another dance?

    What I promise, you wont regret.

    What I promise, is what you will get.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, all I want, is you.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo,To hear the words you once spoke, that were true.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, your touch was the greatest I ever knew.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo, all I need, is you.

    OOOOOoooooooo, All Im asking for, is you. OOonnnllllyyyyy you.

    Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo. Shoo bee, shoobeedoo. Sshhoobbee, shoobeedoo.........

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    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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