Once upon a red moon

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    I just love a good J, don't we all...

    Once upon a red moon

    Once upon a red moon
    I’m on the frowned smile prowl
    Sherlock Holmes with a blood hound sniffing around
    I hover above the ground; belly stacked with merry butterflies proud
    Seeking the sultry, exotic and mouth watering aroma of your scent
    To tickle these taste buds to happy giggles, and untwine my jammed sense
    Where is my good mate, that makes our time together great
    A dutch in the bong to clutch the great beyond
    To leave my spirit uplifted like a soul mate to a lonely bed
    I’ve got to find my Cinderella
    Complete our pair to walk a fairytale abreast
    Zest the quest to puff and whiff this blunts milky breasts
    Maiden Nubian day-dream Queen
    Stops time, unwinds the stiff binds
    That the worlds chained upon my sad eyes
    Feeling your essence
    Unpeeling my time sentence
    For when-ever you’re present
    I but only glide joyous with great pleasure
    Ooh dear Maryjane
    I clearly appreciate your smokescreen’s merry lane
    I’ll marry only thee true Jane
    Cry-out aloud, Hail Mary grunts
    Follow the northern Star to map out the sublime hunt
    I grab hold of the blissful blue-blood indicia
    Catch the dolerean with chronic buds
    Bomb it scarlet with eyes gleaming ginger voltage
    I’ve got to have you around my fingers
    Stricken to have the parity of your crystal clarity
    Forget the savagery of gimmicks play-out tragically
    I’d rather propose with an engagement rings wify search
    Would gladly hold your head in my hand with a mother’s thirst
    White dove ascends to the grand depths, to hand an olive branch to death
    Thee primeria Kush to cushion my shaky footfalls, and much more   
    I’ll do it all again, just to have you kiss my lips once more with your naked adore

      

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    jademelissa74 commented on Once upon a red moon

    05-14-2010

    Wow! Another great piece of yours...This is full of longing for the Nubian Queen that apparently has reached surface :)) I love each line for they contain they right amount of loving potion. You scream out your desires and manage to portray a happy ending to your story, if they perfect ONE comes along....A great write Phatom. My respect lies within your words.

    Phatom

    05/15/2010

    Thank-you, once again your words of apprecation blaze my mind to the horizon bosom..

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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