Open

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Just a message to those who feel alone. Start this new year with an open everything. Open your heart to people, to life. Bad things happen, but we can't live our life in fear of getting hurt. Getting hurt is good it makes us stronger. I believe that God doesn't place things in our paths that we can't handle.

Open

Open

 

Open your eyes

open your heart

open your senses

 

To see what I see

To love what I love

To hear what I hear

 

Open the door

Open that hidden place

Open your heart to happiness

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Open

01-04-2011

I like how you use the word open as a metaphore. I like how you wieved the word throughout the poem, it made it very unique.

imalwasymused

01/04/2011

Thank you. I was hoping someone would notice.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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