Souls Torn Apart

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    Souls Torn Apart


    Life separated us, a force beyond our control.
     

    I see your pictures, i see your likes, i see the friends that are part of your life.
     

    Life tore us apart, everyday, every night constantly under it's watchful patrol.
     

    I see you and cry and hope for someday to be by your side.


    Life came between us, linked by the same blood of two lost souls,
     

    I see you and see a stranger, someone i love yet tends to hide.
     

    It's not your fault, nor am i to blame, it's the sacrifice made by the blade.

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    TinaStevens commented on Souls Torn Apart

    01-02-2011

    i like how this seems to be something everyone can relate to.... its really good
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    imalwasymused

    01/02/2011

    thank you soo much! I love your stuff and it really means a lot

    sharenhansen commented on Souls Torn Apart

    12-31-2010

    will read more this is great it seemed sad spacing adds emphasis
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    imalwasymused

    01/01/2011

    thank you sooo much!!! it's my first one and i was nervous :D

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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