~PAINFUL DECEIVER~

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    ~PAINFUL DECEIVER~

    as the tears of the day are spilt,like a winter rose i slowly wilt. as i try, and try to dry my eyes,i have to lie, and lie to hide my tears. this was my fear. you cast me aside, your last resort. i looked in your eyes, didnt think you the sort. you swept me off my feet, and let me fall on my ass, my heart shattering like hollowed glass. Im doubled over in seeping ache, wanting to sleep forever, for my hearts sake.

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    wildpendigus commented on ~PAINFUL DECEIVER~

    06-18-2009

    I like this because it original unique in style and the title is different, it shows talent, potential, beauty, and most of all self life exeperiences of what you have been through,m passion and love , it would be a good recording for a song grecowong@yaoo.com
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    paskey commented on ~PAINFUL DECEIVER~

    05-28-2009

    Read what others write to realize that you are not alone. You are amazing. So much pain. I never rrealized how those so young feel so much pain. You bring me into your heart and soul. Listen to many songs. I do. That's why writers write. But I guess you know that already. Life is a series of good and bad and bad comes with good. Trust that it's part of the journey and that you were meant to feel the pain you feel. Not fair but it's can't control the ride. Engulf yourself in your gift
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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