so easily 4gotten..........

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    so easily 4gotten..........

    hes erasing me from memory, ive seen the truth and couldnt breathe, knowing me i wouldnt leave but inside and out its killing  me. if i think with my heart ill be deceived, if he looked through my eyes hell see i greive, how fast he left i couldnt beleive, hes exactly what i want but not what i need, so as they say, if you truely love something, set it free, if it comes back its ment to be

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    1990lh commented on so easily 4gotten..........

    05-04-2010

    seem very personal sometimes we have to ask ourselves what are we holding on to and why are u holding on. only then do i believe we have the power to let if that is best.
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    Artie commented on so easily 4gotten..........

    05-04-2010

    I've been on both sides of this. On one side you're looking forward so it doesn't hurt, and the other (this one), you're looking back and holding on, so it feels like dying - 10 from me
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    AmandaT commented on so easily 4gotten..........

    09-15-2009

    With what I'm going through right now in my life, this poem has so much meaning. I feel every word. The passion and the sadness. You could only hold on to something for so long but then you have to let nature take its course of if it was really meant to be.
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    paskey commented on so easily 4gotten..........

    05-28-2009

    So much passion and depth for someone so young. Use your gift wisely. You feel what so many do not and you describe it so well. Many have traveled in that same boat. That's why song writers write songs and poets like you commit your feelings to paper. Cherish your gift.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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