Passion

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    Passion

    It speaks with fire

    burning red, like spontaneous sex

    from something said.

    music felt with romantic affectation

    uninhibited movements of zealous celebration.

    controversy at its peak,

    moral indignation being preached.

    treason to logical reason

    affection without rejection or,....

    Passion, in a flowering design

    devotion to the omnipotent divine

    that answers every small request to be nurtured

    by Mother Natures' breast

    creating irrepressible resurrection

    a definitive correction to imperfect perception.

    Finding grace in every space and mercy in its chosen place.

    Appreciation of every breath,

    is passion in its' proper sense.

     

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    SmileyAngel138 commented on Passion

    06-22-2009

    passion is soooo many things and you described it very well, awesome job :-)

    shellyt

    06/22/2009

    thanks for the comment

    kmeadows commented on Passion

    06-22-2009

    This is well written and it flows well. I agree with some of the other comments , that you show that passion is much more than just the physical act of sex. It is way deeper. You did a wonderful job here!

    shellyt

    06/22/2009

    thanks for reading

    MsKrystle commented on Passion

    06-22-2009

    Wow this is really good..... It expresses the word "passion" perfectly......You've showed how passion goes so much deeper than just sex. Nice work

    shellyt

    06/22/2009

    thank you for reading

    BDIsernhagen commented on Passion

    06-03-2009

    "Appreciation of every breath, is passion in its' proper sense." these are some of the best lines I've read here so far!

    shellyt

    06/04/2009

    Thank you I am inspired by your words

    StandingBear commented on Passion

    06-03-2009

    Ahh, the beautiful lines and balanced verses describing passion with an above reproach angle. Great write. 10

    shellyt

    06/04/2009

    Thank you so much

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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