People

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  • Confusion
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  • Sadness
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  • Life

    People

    People

    They come and go

    People in the rain

    People in the snow

    They are always there

    Staring and waiting

    Waiting for you to say something

    Waiting for something profound

     

    I met a person once

    And they were nice

    And I felt warm and sweet and calm

     

    I met a person today

    And they were nice

    But I felt like ice

    So cold and closed and beating

    Heart beating

    Beating in my ears

    And it just won’t stop

     

    And now I see those looks

    I own them they’re mine

    Looks of stone, disquiet

     

    And I feel sick with woe

    And old

     

    What is the matter with me?

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    TheLastCowboy commented on People

    10-27-2013

    very nice write, I can feel and picture the painting you draw with your words, keep up the good work and keep writing!!! Let your feelings flow out onto the paper!
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    8ineffable8

    10/30/2013

    thanks! :)

    Edais commented on People

    06-22-2013

    Adorable.....an amatuer just like me.if i could write like this i wud win the biggest prize in literature seven times over....bcos like this,there is room fo improvement.
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