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Poem

Pen to paper
Let it fly
words form from nothing
flashing by

running around
inside my head
letters to words
make sense once said


all forms of poems,
with rythme and rhyme
sometimes it's free flow
and others have that chime

 
as for rythme, there are so many versions
short, long, even in the middle of the word.
But no matter the structure of the poem...
what's important is the message to be heard
.


Copyright 2009

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Rygar commented on Poem

08-30-2009

dude... thats what im talking about! it doesnt matter how you write, just that you write! so true!

Singcanary commented on Poem

08-23-2009

Fubar I really like your flow and style. Very nice writing for your age. Your ahaed of your age... keep writing....I enjoyed this.

rellyrelll commented on Poem

07-07-2009

nice poem what else can i say its like a true poem

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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