"A MAN I ONCE KNEW BEFORE" BY: RONALD LOPEZ JR.

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THIS POEM WAS WRITIN BECAUZE I WAS IN A TIME O DESPAIR; I WAS JUST ON TOP OF EVERYTHING AND WITH ONE STUPID MISTAKE I MADE CAUSED ME TO LOSE A GREAT LOST. AND IT WAS PROBLEM AFTER PROBLEM AND I SEEN THIS FOR MY SELF AND THATS WHAT HAPPEND THANKS R.L.J.

"A MAN I ONCE KNEW BEFORE" BY: RONALD LOPEZ JR.

I KNEW A MAN ONCE BEFORE,
WHO SAT DOWN; WATCHED AND ANAYLIZED EVERYTHING RIGHT BEFORE HIM,
WHO TOOK BEATINGS TO THE CHEST PHISICALLY AND EMOTIONALLY,
TO HAVE BRUISES ACROSS THY ACHING CHEST,
I SEEN THIS MAN HOPLESS AND FAITHLESS TO THE CORE,
TO HEAR AND SEE A MAN THAT CRIES OF SUCH SORROWS OF SUCH LOST AND LONELINESS,
I SEEN THIS MAN HAPPY ONCE BEFORE,
NOW I SEE A MAN WITH NO CARE; JUST A BLANK AND WICKED STARE,
HE SITS AND WATCHES THE PAIN ENTER AND THE PAIN DRAIN,
HE FEELS THE LOVE BUT THE HATERED HE WILL SHOW,
THIS MAN I KNEW ONCE BEFORE,
TOLD ME TO SIT BACK AND ANAYLIZE THE PROBLEM,
IF NOT THEN THE PROBLEM WILL ANAYLIZE YOU,
I SEEN THIS MAN FALL FROM HAVING IT ALL,
TO TRYING SO HARD TO SAVE HIM SELF FROM BECOMING THIS EVIL MAN,
THE MORE THEY PUSHED HIM AWAY THE FURTHER HE GOT; MENTALLY PHISICALLY, AND EMOTINALY,
THIS MAN I KNEW ONCE BEFORE,
WAS A GREAT FRIEND OF MINE,
OH YEAH THAT MAN I ONCE KNEW BEFORE................... WAS ME!!!!!!!!!!!


BY;___________________

RONALD LOPEZ JR. FEB 5TH 2009

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