"I Wish You Were Here"

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    "I Wish You Were Here"
    The hours turn into days, the days into years.
    The memories fall in a haze, the haze the cause of tears.
    The feeling of running out of time more eminent with fear.
    Nothing like enthusiasm of mine when you were near.
    I wish things were running fine, maybe my mind more clear.
    Now I must say I no longer want you mine, cuzits off to find the new, to bring me joy and tears.

    By: Jeremiah Jensen
    my brother

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    Shadowwalker commented on "I Wish You Were Here"

    11-12-2010

    lovely work. Sadness rings within your words. I loved it. If anything else your heart is there. great work
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    Madelynn commented on "I Wish You Were Here"

    11-14-2009

    First time I read your bro. Let me tell ya, you have done a good thing to share this raw, deep talent with us(if he don't give ya a plie-driver for it!LOL) My son is an amazing poet-he wont let Momma share his work either. I am genuinely impressed with this! Nice!-10
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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