"JUST LOOKING"

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    "JUST LOOKING"

    I look for a woman of simple means,
    Who can love but one.

    I look for a woman of strong character,
    With the softest of heart.

    I look for a woman with a loving nature,
    Content in her ways.

    I look for a woman young or mature,
    Wantonly soft, yet mildly demure.

    I look for a woman I can trust to cast my lot.
    In other words my dear friend
    I am looking for a woman,
    who is everything, My last was not.

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    AshRenee commented on "JUST LOOKING"

    07-14-2009

    This doesn't seem to me to be about lost love. Rather sadness about her not being the one. Someone who is your everything is special enough to only come once. I didn't see the end coming, though, so good job. It's good to place that in there so sweetly and easily

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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