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Why do people hurt me?Why do they leave me?
Why God can't anyone
understand me
Or is it me......
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2 Comments
Tags: Emotional
Why do they leave me?
Why God can't anyone
understand me
Or is it me......
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ladydraeko commented on "?"
06-02-2009
- good job for your first poem, a lot of feeling and straight to the point, keep writing you will keep getting better and better at it, you've got it in you now its time to let it out!!!! hugs
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06-02-2009
- wow. the emotion in this poem was evident. even with its length, u werent left without the complete thought. i do wish it was longer but the pain sang out and i listened. very good job
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