"The Drum Beats of War"

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A poem on a plaque called war that took place in Central America that cost the lives of 75,000 people and the lessons we learn throughtout the passage.

"The Drum Beats of War"

The drum beats of war have plagued my country for years 

The drum beats of war have seen its share of blood, sweat, and tears

 
Innocent children trained to kill an early age

Falling victim to genocide is only the first stage

 

Mothers crying out to their sons to only hear their own echo

An empty room with no roof is also ningun techo

 

Ammunition is their only ambition

With no repercussions has become their tradition

 

Abuse of power and authority by our government has reached a fever pitch

The people have risen up and bearing arms to equip against the evil witch

 

Armies against guerilla warfare will never led to peace only destruction

If you choose to remain silent about social injustices
You’re a mere puppet of reconstruction

 

Speaking the truth is now a revolutionary act of love, pain and sorrow

Rest in peace to the countless of heroines who died before they could see tomorrow

 

Only in death do we realize things after their done

Watch over the mother’s, fathers and obviously their sons

 

A 12 year war that saw approximately 75,000 causalities

Let us never repeat a horror that has no remedies

 

Monsenor romero spoke uncanny of the injustices that occurred during the war

Many tuned in to listen via radio especially the poor

 

In March of 1980 that voice was silenced with a political tool called violence

Let us never waver during times of unyielding pressure

I assure you we will reach the promise land like a hidden treasure

 

Hundreds of thousands fled to Honduras to secure a future for their own

Once they arrived they knew it would be tough to turn a house into a happy home

 

The drum beats of war is a culmination of a 12 year odyssey

Take off the shutters from beneath your eyes and you will clearly see

 

That strength and hope is what kept my family from falling victim to a similar fate

Now I’m fortunate enough to tell you, you can also succeed because it’s never to late

In a world where the rich get richer and the poor get poorer

The transfer of power always shifts to the villains of horror

 

Criminal minded, belligerent tyrants rule the earth

Terminating a pregnancy to prevent birth is not what it’s worth

 

The resources third world nations have acquired is enough to feed the hungry

So do not tell me that an evil spirit has spread amongst me

 

Pestilence and famine has become a reoccurring theme

God can you save us from this nefarious scheme?

 

Revolutionaries run through my family tree similar to roots

Engaged in an endless struggle for freedom while evading men in black suits

 

Either we exhaust all options and die for what we believe in

Or remain stagnant on issues that matter which would be the biggest sin

 

In the end lives are lost and villages and towns are never found

Concrete jungles with dead bodies are seen as I walk around

 

It’s interesting how atrocities can change your entire destiny

So all I want for you to do is just smile for me

 

We are a living testament of survival one can only dream

Trust no one because things are not always what it seems

 

Hand me your hand if you are willing to unclench your fist

Give me a hug if you wish to uncross your arms who can resist?

 

Lay your head on my shoulder when it seems hard to keep your head up

Love conquers evil so always remember to never let up

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bklynrizz commented on "The Drum Beats of War"

01-27-2010

Except for a few minor grammatical errors this was an incredible write. You managed to tell a terrible truth of civil war and social injustice in a poem. Fantastic job. I have been to Honduras in the 80's. The region was beautiful it was to bad for the social unrest. Keep writing my friend this was a great write.

poetryprincess commented on "The Drum Beats of War"

06-11-2009

great poem your an artist you should perfeshional you are great i felt as if I were there and that I could trust you.

hbenitez

06/11/2009

Thanks a plenty it is remarkable how words can touch you in ways one can only dream of. You should continue to write and inspire!

magati commented on "The Drum Beats of War"

06-06-2009

i cant start putting words to ur words....i can only feel the pain, the cries, and some laughters at the end....and hope...u have lived to be a true hero of the past hates and pain and distructions.....u r the future of hope and faith to mankind....here is r my stretched arms with unclenched fist and uncrossed arms.......

hbenitez

06/07/2009

Thank you brother I'll be glad to embrace one another with compassion and love that humanity despertely needs. One Love.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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