Relegated Dreams.....

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Relegated Dreams.....

Beneath this pale, placid skin,
My soul embarks on journeys,
Infinitely mysterious, thrilling and bizarre!
On one such journey I stumble upon,
A locked door, partially hidden, forgotten,
Inquisitive my soul; I enter,
A chamber; dark, ominous,
Stumbling along the path unseen,
Hands outstretched, groping, acting as my vision,
A blinding light dazzles my eyes,
I spy a dream, descend slowly,
From the unseen heights, unachieved, distraught,
Dead!
Crawling into a crevice, It lies,
Still, immobile; I realize,
I stand in the catacombs, the tomb of my dreams,
Where every hope, every wish, every desire,
I ever felt was banished, executed, life never giving them,
A chance to be born, to become real,
To exist!
By the fading glow, I step ahead,
I see, my life laid out,
In front of me, my fantasies,
Lying listless, Sepia tinged,
Cold, from their death!
Living it all over again, the pain, the hurt,
I turn away, nauseated, unable to take it anymore,
Running back I find, no exit, no door,
A one way trip this was,
Relentless, I try to find a way out,
Coz am suffocating, the morbid stench,
Of slowly decomposing desires, overwhelming me,
Grim silver spectres surround me,
Shrill echoes, reverberate,
A requiem they sing for my soul,
Trapped here for infinity,
In this sarcophagus, of unfulfilled hopes,
These catacombs of relegated dreams!
Beneath this pale, placid skin,
My soul embarks on journeys,
Infinitely mysterious, thrilling and bizarre!
On one such journey I stumble upon,
A locked door, partially hidden, forgotten,
Inquisitive my soul; I enter,
A chamber; dark, ominous,
Stumbling along the path unseen,
Hands outstretched, groping, acting as my vision,
A blinding light dazzles my eyes,
I spy a dream, descend slowly,
From the unseen heights, unachieved, distraught,
Dead!
Crawling into a crevice, It lies,
Still, immobile; I realize,
I stand in the catacombs, the tomb of my dreams,
Where every hope, every wish, every desire,
I ever felt was banished, executed, life never giving them,
A chance to be born, to become real,
To exist!
By the fading glow, I step ahead,
I see, my life laid out,
In front of me, my fantasies,
Lying listless, Sepia tinged,
Cold, from their death!
Living it all over again, the pain, the hurt,
I turn away, nauseated, unable to take it anymore,
Running back I find, no exit, no door,
A one way trip this was,
Relentless, I try to find a way out,
Coz am suffocating, the morbid stench,
Of slowly decomposing desires, overwhelming me,
Grim silver spectres surround me,
Shrill echoes, reverberate,
A requiem they sing for my soul,
Trapped here for infinity,
In this sarcophagus, of unfulfilled hopes,
These catacombs of relegated dreams!

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hcrellers commented on Relegated Dreams.....

01-27-2010

Oh My God. You remind me of Poe. THIS is amazing. You take my breath away. ahhmazing

MaV

01/27/2010

@hcrellers Thank u so much! am glad u likd it! :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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