Remember Me?

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    Remember Me?

    On a brisk stroll on a road of thoughts,do you find yours drifting off in a sea of dreams with poetic themes involving skittle sweets and frozen chocolate creams;Are you reminded of me?As you rest on stairs of piano keys, relaxed on winding steps which ascend similar to treble clefts.Vibrations of an angel's voice fill the room and caress my ears in masseuse's key,As you use notes to paint heaven's scenes;Do you remember singing to me?When you turn your mind toward scholarly things and your mind takes you to places only the third eye can see;Knowledge gained equals achievement and you've given me much to succeed; but I wonder if you know what you achieved for me.Poetry is like a cause with a universal allure, so we can join hands through stanzas of lyrical flirts;because to have a muse is a Blessing, inspiration from realms higher than these;Do you remember inspiring me?when time passes and distance increases, know I will never forgett, a certain mocha complection and hips like Hershey kisses.To touch through confession and reflexion is a connection and a Blessing indeed;So when you reflect, do you remember your connection to me?

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    hattyej commented on Remember Me?

    11-23-2009

    There is so much in this piece. Very well written and I think if it was presented in a different format, the total essence of this piece would be enhanced. I really loved it ( a few typos)

    frazel5 commented on Remember Me?

    10-26-2009

    Wow, that's absolutely beautiful. So well written. Wonderful job.

    cazhawls commented on Remember Me?

    12-15-2008

    that's beautiful!

    cazhawls commented on Remember Me?

    12-15-2008

    that's beautiful!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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