Connection Through Rhyme

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    Connection Through Rhyme
    Syllables of love that lead to words passion.Stanzas that lay the frame work of connection ever-lasting.Though unseen it is you for whom my pen bleeds.So even in prolonged absence you are with me.These lines fill my mind with possibilities of our synergy,A world away yet I can touch an Angel,An opportunity I wouldn't miss even if fatal.Paragraphs of spiritual adhesion, To merge with mentally would be my greatest achievement.As I communicate with a Lover's diction,I hope you can see.Separation is like Imprisonmentand our connection through rhyme is a Blessing and my Clemency.

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    hattyej commented on Connection Through Rhyme

    11-23-2009

    It really is amazing the connection that can be found in a shared passion.... I can see from reading this (the second one of yours) that you have found that common passion....I can relate... Another very well written piece but the format you use really interrupts the flow of your words....(not being critical just a critique)
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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