Forever Faithfull

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    Forever Faithfull

    I wander if you knew you stole my mind the first time we met eyes/like a thief in the night or a godly sign/from afroditie/ you're a goddess and the reason I dream/The hands of time cease to be when you looking at me/Others say I'm blind because I worship idle things and you're a idle dream/but in reality you're Blesssing and not a fanticy/A true friendship deeper the darkest night/ A ray of light from the cradle of life/I feel like Luther, if this world were mine, I'd probbly give you the sky/a sacrafice like mans rib or the blood of Christ/In you/I have faith unconditionaly/When non-believers try to slander you I give them no heed/ Because I see them curupting seeds from the soil of the streets/Tried to abort me but still I breath/With every breath dedicated to you/ you're the reason seasons change and flowers bloom/Your escence I consum/Like water from a holy lagoon/The thickest oil could'nt taint you/The day our spirits part would be the day forever came too soon/If you were the sun I'd wanna be the moon/To use our orbit patterns to connect with you/Like in past lives in different tribes with you/And even though I see women just as fine as you/You're a heaven sent diamond they dont shine like you/The sweetest caramel, I dream of tasteing you/ I love your motherly spirit and the feeling being near it/I embrace your confidence when others fear it/The thought of of you is like a virus I cant cure it/When fools disrespect just remember they're second childhood children/And their feeble minds cant except the learning experience/In your eyes I see the pyrimids/The mothers and daughters of pharos and princes/So instead of song I give you testiment/I'm thinking I was put here to bear witness/Its evident/Please believe these are my true feelings/I wanna be the one to make sweat like class with Richard Simmons/To be undoubtedly faithfull like a cathic nun/To reach you I swim across seas through desserts I run/Just to see my rose that grew from the concreat in the slums/In your presence my heart beats like a tribal drum/Its a dangerous love like my love of guns/I wanna give you foot massages when your hard day done/Make you rose peddle baths and let the water just run/Then wrap you in robes the colors of greens browns and oranges/Like I said this aint a song I cant descibe you in choruses and verses/If your presence was monitary you'd make platnum worthless/The penalty should be death to speak of thee as less this /Cause when I hear that kind of Ignorance it HURTS/Like Maxwell all I wanna do is show you a women's worth/FOREVER YOURS

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    harmony74 commented on Forever Faithfull

    10-26-2009

    Absolutely wonderful! I won't attempt to ruin what u have by making some simple remark. i can't find the words I want to to use to exspress my liking to your wonderful poem..well done!

    onyxprince commented on Forever Faithfull

    05-24-2009

    I love all that you put into this. The relations that you put with life are extreamly relevant here. You are awsome with you words.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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