Run
Strike the asphalt
Every step a downward
Kick
Asphalt and rubber
Meeting violently in
A blow
Life, stolen and sweet
In quick, needy
Puffs
Hanging in the air
To vanish without
A trace
Don't you wish you
Could just go
Too?
Run
3 Comments
Tags: Emotional
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08-18-2010
- They say a picture is worth a 1000 words, so it is. but in this case ur short thesis, which is good, is worth a 1000 pictures. well done my young poetic friend !
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deathbysociety commented on Run
02-23-2010
- Amazing my lovely, im glad you decided to post something, you genius women.... great write.
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