SECONDS LEADS TO YOUR ETERNITY

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    SECONDS LEADS TO YOUR ETERNITY
    GIVE ME SECOND OF UR TIME
    LISTEN 2 MY HEART FOR A MINUTE
    HOPE U DON'T MIND STAYING FOR AN HOUR
    I'M GONNA WORK ON KEEPING U 24/7
    LEADING TO THE REST OF OUR DAYS
    I KNOW YUR TIME IS WORTH MO THAN A SEC
    TO STAY ALIVE OUR HEART BEATS SO MUCH A MINUTE
    THE LOVIN I HAVE WILL LAST FOR HOURS
    AZ MUCH FROM 24/7 TO 365
    THAT'S HOW MANY DAYS I WANNA STAY 4 EVER

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    WordSlinger commented on SECONDS LEADS TO YOUR ETERNITY

    09-22-2009

    nice, I see you love for eternity, with the one you love.
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    optimistic commented on SECONDS LEADS TO YOUR ETERNITY

    05-22-2009

    I love this writing I wanted to here more out of this poem I see were your going with this it is great
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    samuelj

    09/20/2009

    One love

    WordSlinger

    09/22/2009

    I'm with Sylvester, we want more.......

    samuelj

    09/22/2009

    I'll take it to a part 2 soon...Thanx guys

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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