Secrets, why?

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    Secrets, why?

    What's with all the secrets?
    Is there someone else you long for?
    Everything has changed between us.
    I just don't understand.
    Your actions now are so supicous.
    It is driving my mind insane.
    Has the love you had for me surpassed?
    What can I do to persuade you?
    I trust that you wouldn't hurt me.
    Am I stupid to belive you?
    The love I have overrides my thoughts.
    I hope you aren't taking me forgranted.
    All I do know is you are hiding something.
    My heart can sense there is some secracy.
    You must understand where I come from.
    Can't you see the things that you are doing.
    With every day that passes by
    I can't help from making myself cry.
    Please let me know that you are faithful
    These secrets have got to stop.

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    kdarcy commented on Secrets, why?

    09-12-2010

    Sorry if this is a real drama. I like the concept of the forever optismist but, in matters of love- the hurt will be deep. Many go through this, love can be blind and trusting, doubt should never enter in. An alternate title could be, " Tell Me Its Not So " You captured much in this write, be well

    drew commented on Secrets, why?

    07-13-2009

    Where is the rhyme? Kind of a mishmash of dialogue. Get out of this relationship!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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