-Seed-

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    -Seed-

    I am a seed waiting to be planted
    i see my god dig a deep dark hole
    as he stuffs me in there
    i wonder if all my kind
    has the same fate
    he pours sweet water on me
    and i go to sleep
    -I am a seed-

    I wake up as i
    sprot out of the ground
    i hear a thunderstorm coming
    "aahh" my first bath
    As the water comes from the black heavens above 
    I wonder if i will
    Survive
    AS the summer goes on 
    I waite for my master to come 
    And he does not
    -I was a seed-

    I grow weak weak weaker 
    and i die with the thought 
    that some one
    might take my place in this caotic world

    Iwas a seed waiting
    to be planted
    and now i am a flower
    waiting to get buried
    -I wish i was a seed- 

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    ccslim commented on -Seed-

    10-28-2009

    A good write! Plot well bought and glides though good!
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    Dancer022597 commented on -Seed-

    08-09-2009

    It sounds awfully like pokie14's poem called "Seed".. very intersesting though. I still liked it though.
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    star14

    08/14/2009

    yeah he is my foster brother and we have some of the same poems that we wrote for school we both wrote that one together like in 8th grade and we had to memorise it and well that is that

    Helios commented on -Seed-

    08-09-2009

    I have read for poem... it sound very... what's the word...familiar?
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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