-Stars-

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    -Stars-

    When we all look
    up at the stars
    in the sky
    we all see different things
    one famous person said
    that we can tell
    how many stars are up there
    and well we can not
    it is a force that is to powerful
    than us
    we can not make the stars
    in the sky it just happens
    we can not make them die
    it is just a process of
    nature when I look up at the stars
    it does not even matter
    how many times
    I do look up
    I will still be in awe.

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    1LostGypsy commented on -Stars-

    10-10-2009

    Good stuff. Originality makes the tru artist. It can take years to develope your own style and perfect it, but you are in the right direction. Never stop, it will only get better.~LostGypsy

    Helios commented on -Stars-

    08-08-2009

    I was looking at poems on nature and I found this poem that was very distinctive from others with an original style. I noticed that you were also the same age as me and I was happy to know that there are youths interested in poetry. Thank-you for your poems and if you ever get a chance, you should give me an opinion of my poetry [ English Sonnet I and Italian Sonnet I]. Also, there are other poets who write about nature [like ViolinestAP] and their works are great. Thanks again...

    star14

    08/08/2009

    hey thankx for the comment i dont get a lot i just type what is on my mind and some times that is a good thing. well wright me soon when will you be on here star

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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