-butterfly-

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    -butterfly-

    I am a butterfly in the making
    i am tired
    so I'm going
    to my abode
    My sanctuary
    I will wake up
    and fly over the world
    and see the world in a
    different view point
    I will fly farther
    than the
    Great wall of China
    I will fly higher than the
    Eiffel Tower
    i love being a butterfly.

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    rollerderby commented on -butterfly-

    10-14-2009

    Fly mt dear while you are young, because as you get older you loosesome of the dust off your wings. Fly and enjoy your life as you explore what lies ahead. Well done dear...
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    scrye commented on -butterfly-

    08-08-2009

    Beautiful poem star and so much like a butterfly you truely are. Wonderfully written with a really nice flow. I really liked this one. A 10 from me.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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