she lay there...

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  • Suicide
    • ivylove
    • is tired and in love...also writting love poems...hehe

    she lay there...

    i saw her
    se lay thee
    wrappedin white
    cotton sheets. she held
    a knife, with sad eyes
    and a depressed look
    she lay there, in the corner.
    i didn't think it would
    be tonight.

    a quick movement
    i heard no sound
    just one blink
    and she was gone.
    her mother walked in
    tonight washer last....

    she lay there
    wrapped in bloodshed sheets
    she lay there
    knowing her dad didn't care
    he threw a party as
    she lay there

    i couldn't move as
    she lay there
    tear streaked face,
    bloodshed sheets.
    she lay there
    dead as can be

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    justme8495 commented on she lay there...

    06-14-2009

    very good poem the words flow toghter very well... I know where you get it from.. I am very proud of you... mom

    IsraelDenim commented on she lay there...

    06-10-2009

    Wow...that was truly something. I can tell that this was a heart felt poem. I give you a ten for intensity...keep writing yo, and you will be a splendid poet in no time. =]

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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