SMOKING EFFECT

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    SMOKING EFFECT

    A saw a worshipper
    Making a sacrifice
    He rose up early
    He gathered his sticks in a box
    A stick for each sacrifice
    The flame went higher and higher
    The smoke went into the cloud
    Worshipper already in the cloud
    Praying to the air
    Found out that worshipper and sacrifice
    Are the same and one
    His prayers has been answered
    Angel cancer will come soon
    god of Cancer will deliver him to the grave.

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    Mandi commented on SMOKING EFFECT

    01-28-2013

    interesting style.... haven't made the connection yet , but will read it a few more times before I decide on a score

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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