MY HEART

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    MY HEART

    At the core of my
    sensory faculty, focus
    at core of sensitivity of
    deepest perception.
    Control of self neither restrain
    of its influence hard to perform
    Level of its elasticity of return
    (or it bridging point it reached )
    level of no return no retreat
    influence of it grasp all the valve
    of locomotion in me. All the pistons in actions

    the hind wheel of mind influence by it
    found it obedient to the waves of steam
    kicking hard in the direction of the combustion core
    could not restrain it
    faster the hind wheel goes
    followed by the arms holding the wheel

    watched as flower and trees passed by
    flower of all sort, colour noted
    height and size they fly by
    conscious to the eye they are
    cast on both sides
    they strode along

    hard to find their colour and size
    could not hold down the steam
    move on in line with the core of the heart.

    Found that the real flower at the core,
    is a rebuff in itself; an arrow in the heart

    found conspicuous and comeliness to be vain
    What count is character the basis for virtue.

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    tierra7 commented on MY HEART

    02-08-2013

    Beautifully written Piece..truly Royal!! .((((huggz))))Tierra@}-'-,

    hope

    02/14/2013

    Thanks for the comment.

    hope

    02/18/2013

    sorry i saw the comment below- Beautifully written Piece..truly Royal!! .((((huggz))))Tierra@}-'-,

    dahlusion commented on MY HEART

    02-08-2013

    A metaphorical masterpiece of wisdom—bravo! —smiles))

    hope

    02/14/2013

    Thanks. I wish i can write more than that. I have kind of not been writing for some years now. just get back to originalpoetry.com and other poetry site (poetry.com) with the hope of rekindling the old flame of writing poem. the only thing that give me concern is that i dont hav a book and am not school to have someone to show how to do it better the professional way. here in Nigeria you have to spent most of your time looking for money by the time you close, you are already tired to sleep of. i want to use my experience, observation, nature and event happenning and convert them into poems which is what am doing Thank you.

    Mandi commented on MY HEART

    02-08-2013

    you are a much higher level thinker than I am.... no, no, there is no doubt about it, your brain works on a much high plain than mine ...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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