something like a song

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    ok i was just listening to this track and writting lyrics to it....no idea if it will work
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qX1AhJZL6o&feature=related

    something like a song

    im just a dreamer of dreams that wants to see what it means to be free of these controling feigns

    take me away on these wings and i hope that it brings my whole lifes withholdings

    you left at dawn, i never saw, all the calls missed and now gone

     im feeling sick and tired of the wait and i just cant seem to find an escape     that leads to places I can awaken find my peace but then i am shaken from this dream to societies race then left to think was i held to asleep

    held to sleep?

    was i held to sleep

    held to sleep

    was i held to sleep....

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    1990lh commented on something like a song

    09-25-2009

    that was beautiful luv it great job i'm sure it will sound nice with music. plz keep up the great writing
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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