uneven

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    uneven

     I had your heart and my heart to lose in this game now that were apart I know whos heart still remained you easily moved on while I felt the pain theres nothing left atleast of me here to claim

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    DirtyLilSecret commented on uneven

    06-01-2009

    Good poem, short sweet and to the point and it is very true. Even though it is short i can tell what you mean and it has very good imagry
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    Tetsugin

    06/01/2009

    thanks I liked yours too

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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