Something

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    Something
    There is something beneath nothing,
    within a scar never seen
    where your mind always is
    another self in the shade.
    distraction grips, 
    with out any notice.
    your mind is nothing,
    your life is something
    blind through the mirror,
    a living attempt,
    under the sky
    we're away from dreams.
    things are felt
    from those who cannot.
    an absent luminensce, 
    something beneath nothing. 
    There is something beneath nothing,
    within a scar never seen
    where your mind always is
    another self in the shade.
    distraction grips, 
    with out any notice.
    your mind is nothing,
    your life is something
    blind through the mirror,
    a living attempt,
    under the sky
    we're away from dreams.
    things are felt
    from those who cannot.
    an absent luminensce, 
    something beneath nothing. 

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    sevyn7 commented on Something

    02-18-2011

    Very deep poem, and well written, I love the flow, and the udertone of the poem.
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    xslayer2x

    02/19/2011

    thanks a lot! really appreciate it.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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