Sometimes It's Better To Be # 2

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    I wrote this poem after a fight in a parking lot, over a parking spot.(note: three empty spots on either side of where I parked, and somebody said," I took his spot", there was a fight, cops were called and neither had charges filed against them.) I was on top when the cops showed up.

    Sometimes It's Better To Be # 2
            Send me to the moon -
    Do you think I would care?
            Send me to the Russian front,
    If you dare...
            Send me away,
    To keep you from harm -
            Send me to a place,
    They call the funny farm.

            I don't give a DAMN !!
    I can escape from here,
            Then, I'll be back in your face,
     To bring you more cheer.

            I'm still inside, PAL !!
    But, I'm getting out.
            It won't be long,  Before,
    I right my wrong -
            And thats a GUARANTEE,
    with-out a doubt.

            When I get out,
    Who do you think I will hunt?
             I will hunt you,  Because,
    You are a sniveling little PUNK !
             I will find YOU, -
    And DEATH, It will be -
             Because:
      You thought,"You were number 1",
             But,
    YOU DIDN'T COUNT ME !!

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    saskiab1971 commented on Sometimes It's Better To Be # 2

    02-20-2010

    very disturbing. I love it! nice flow and rhythm in this piece.
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    nonners commented on Sometimes It's Better To Be # 2

    11-16-2009

    whoo hoo i liked this one. short sweet n too the point
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    RobertScott

    11/16/2009

    Thanks for the comment!! I appreciate it. It was a fun night in Murphreesboro, Tn. Glad I didn't go to jail, would have missed work.( awww ) Stay Sweet and be safe.

    dumplin commented on Sometimes It's Better To Be # 2

    10-09-2009

    wow, I'm scared of you! LOL I liked the flow of this. It's dark, too. I like dark.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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