SONG OF SORROW

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    • SOLAR SYSTEM The sun is in heaven beyond. The moon awakes elsewhere. The stars receive their light. Maybe to fall to earth in our sight. The other planets are not our lights. They are like the watchers. On a pale, blue night. Brenda G Radford Copyright ©2008 Brenda G Radford

    SONG OF SORROW

    It's horrible, dear Lord, with the need to horde.
    With the need to love, without help from above.
    So many things to say, without the ability to pray.
    With the need to pay, with no blessings today.
    So much sorrow.
    Nothing to borrow.
    Seething with pain.
    Without the ability to reign.
    The sun shines on the good, but they just stood.
    You're blessings are gone.
    Now this is my song.

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    bforibus commented on SONG OF SORROW

    11-17-2008

    i loved this poem. maybe im a sucker for a tragedy
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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