Struggle

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  • Suffering

    Poem Commentary

    Tell me what you feel

    Struggle

    Destruction happens everyday on a massive scale
    Everyday people want to jump but can't find a place to bail
    Do you know what's that's like ....
    Like walking around free...but your mind is a cell.
    Self-preservation is what she trying to get at...
    But everyday is a 1 step forward ...a big jump back
    How can you get anywhere...against odds like that
    Fighting against an enemy...that you can't beat
    Just the thought is enough to have you sick for weeks..
    A knife to your heard a gun to your soul..
    There's no warmth from the soul.. and everyone's heart is froze
    No up no down just a desert feeling that surrounds.

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    BigDaddyCash commented on Struggle

    11-21-2009

    This is poetry, great imagery an intense plot a revelation in thought. Thanks for sharing. LOL, BDC

    cmlestrade commented on Struggle

    08-20-2009

    Good effort, interesting message about our daily struggles against all odds.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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