Stuck!

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    This happened to me and my friend... it was actually a school assignment. we had to tell a story in a poem

    Stuck!

    “Let’s go for a drive”

    My brother said

    But Grandpa said

    “You’re going to get stuck!”

    Clueless,

    We went along

    Wondering

    What grandpa meant

    “Drive at your own risk”

    The sign said ahead

    We’re kids

    We’re risky

    We had to drive on

    The bumps in the road

    They shook us

    They took us

    Down through the mud

    The deep

    Oozing

    Mud

    We were stuck

    We got out

    We pushed

    Harder,

    Faster,

    Longer

    It didn’t budge

    But we were determined

    We didn’t want to be put

    To shame

    By grandpa

    And

    We did everything

    But finally

    We gave up

    We walked

    Miles

    To the nearest place

    Where someone

    Anyone

    Could pick us up

    Our feet were

    Piled with

    Mud

    But

    We were saved

    Someone came by

    And

    The truck was

    Pulled out of the

    Mud

    Like life

    We get piled up

    With deep

    Oozing

    Mud

    And we feel like

    We’re never

    Ever

    Going to get our feet

    Clean

    And bare

    Again

    But someone

    Someone amazing

    Comes along

    And

    Takes our hand

    To pull us

    Out of the

    Mud

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    shannie76 commented on Stuck!

    11-01-2009

    LoL! This is so cute. Really great story and a lesson of life. I love it.

    AmiAnderson

    11/02/2009

    Thanks!! It was a crazy time lol :P

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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