Thawing Out

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  • Lost Love

    Thawing Out

    The ice is slowly melting off my soul
    I can feel the warmth like a red hot coal
    Didn't think it would take this long
    But you were just too strong and wrong
    For me, for you, we never had a chance
    The music stopped, and so did the dance.

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    DocK commented on Thawing Out

    10-09-2009

    Very nicely put Alanya... Guess we've all got our stories to tell about lost love... Nice work.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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