Thawing Out


  • Lost Love

    Thawing Out

    The ice is slowly melting off my soul
    I can feel the warmth like a red hot coal
    Didn't think it would take this long
    But you were just too strong and wrong
    For me, for you, we never had a chance
    The music stopped, and so did the dance.

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    DocK commented on Thawing Out


    Very nicely put Alanya... Guess we've all got our stories to tell about lost love... Nice work.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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