Thawing Out

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  • Lost Love

    Thawing Out
    The ice is slowly melting off my soul
    I can feel the warmth like a red hot coal
    Didn't think it would take this long
    But you were just too strong and wrong
    For me, for you, we never had a chance
    The music stopped, and so did the dance.

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    DocK commented on Thawing Out

    10-09-2009

    Very nicely put Alanya... Guess we've all got our stories to tell about lost love... Nice work.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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