The Beauty Within

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The Beauty Within

In silence it lies in waiting for its moment to shine,
Like this emotional journey through life and time.
The beauty within gives all of creation a moment,
To be touched by the great of loves divine.
Its rising is awoken and given away to reveal its awesome beauty,
That fills our souls with a spray of light to overcome our day.
Gives meanings to the moon and stars and names the constellations,
And separates the galaxies so that others to may find their way.
For it is love that gives the inspiration to be passionate,
Like an artist with a brush in hand.
To master the works of all who inspired,
That makes the world understand.
Sometimes what may be clouded overcast or gray?
Cannot change what has been broken by our own ways.
But we can thrive in our own understanding,
And learn what there is to give.
To breathe life into our creations,
To give what there is to live.
For it is love to those who let it happen,
Hope for those who have none.
It is all to have peace and tranquility,
That enables us to rise up with the sun.

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schizopoet commented on The Beauty Within

01-27-2011

I enjoyed the beauty within this poem. A very expressive poem that uses great imagery. I give this poem a 10. I like your style and flow. Keep up the good work. Please keep writing.

Tidewader

01/27/2011

so many of you whom have gave such great remarks about this poem and I love writing the powerful message inscribed into my work like an etching that it finds a place in your heart also. That it will etch its message into your own soul and that it gives you peace and tranquility.

PunoAngulus commented on The Beauty Within

02-09-2009

I love the visual you give me of traveling and experiencing a spiritual journey through life and existence. Amazing.

Tidewader

01/27/2011

thank you for your critique and imput on my opoetry for this is a truely powerful writing for me

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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