The Breakup

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  • Lost Love

    The Breakup

    Sick of crying
    Tired of trying
    Outside I'm smiling
    But inside I'm dying

    Thinking of you
    Around the clock
    Wishing you were here
    To be my depression block

    Loving no other
    As time goes on
    Tears in my eyes
    From dusk till dawn

    Missing you dearly
    Wanting to see you
    To hold you close
    To make it through

    Depression taking over
    Sadness engulfing me
    Sad music in my ears
    You in my memory

    Come back to me please
    Talk to me or something
    Just to let me know
    If this meant anything

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on The Breakup

    10-10-2010

    This poem is very good. I think it is real and full of heartbreak. I love it when you say, "wishing you were here to be my depression block." It is very true, many think that if their lost love would just come back, it would end their sadness.
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    Darkfinger93

    10/12/2010

    that's pretty much exactly how i felt

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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