The Fantasy

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thought of someone, and think some more.... this is where this is born.

The Fantasy

The tattoos of her body show
     The curves, the figure and spells
       that capture the eyes and more
Like a snake that charms
     With rattles of gold
       It´s the warning that follows
              Her bite of love
    

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ImStillHere commented on The Fantasy

07-11-2010

this is really good. i especially love the details. :)

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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