The Last Time

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This is about me and my team and thinking of how its going to be like playing our last game of basketball together. This is how i would imagen it. I would be sad and scared but happy. This peom made me cry when i wrote it. I hope you like it. :)

The Last Time

Me and my friends get in the car
We drive to the gym and get out
We walk into the locker room for the last time
We put our jersys on for the last time
We think this is the last time for all of this
We are leaving going out into the world
We are letting all of this go
Our couch walks in for the last time
Sectional night the biggest night of the year
Our boys are in stands as they were every night
We all stould up and walked down the stairs for last time
We walked out of the tunnel
And every one cheered
The same five people walked out to start the game
She jumped I grabed the ball and ran down the floor
I shoot and made it everyone stood up and cheered
Then before you knew it
It was half time
We were up 22 to 4
We sat in our locker room and cheered and yelled like we had done a thousand times before
Then it was time to walk out
I was first like always and we ran around the gym once then sat down
The same five went out and played
We played better then ever before
the final buzzer rang and we had won
Everyone came down on the floor
Before me knew it our boyfriends were holding us high in the air
We went to the locker room and changed
I sat their for a little bit thinking of how many times we had been in here
I thought of the night my boyfriend had kissed me after the game
And how we had been yelled at by couch
But that was over now
We wouldn't be here anymore playing
We would go off to college and play there
And we would forget about all of the fun we had here
But for the last time i walked down the stairs
Last time to walk out of the tunnel
I walked for the last time to the middle of the floor
He was their waiting for me
He kissed me on the fore head
He walked to the stairs and i followed in his arms for the last time
For the last time I shut the lights off on the floor
And For the last time I walked out into the night thinking about basketball

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jerseycrtz commented on The Last Time

06-12-2010

aaawwwwwwwwwww!!!! It almost made me cry! I cant wait to go to college, ut I dont wana leave all you guys! :'(

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BentlyB’s Poems (26)

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Love Lies 1
I Want Him But Can't Have Him 2
wanting you 1
The Last Time 1
I Need You 2
Baseball 1
Girls 2
Dream 1
Thunder Storm 1
Boy to a man 3
Survive 1
My Secret Love 3
First Love 1
Boys! 1
what i feel for you 1
Mr. Heath 1
Confusion 1
Together 1
Dads 1
Waiting 1
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Him & Her 1
Why 2
My world 1
You & him 1
You, Me 1