Thunder Storm

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    Thunder Storm

     I see the storm coming
    it is coming fast
    I hear the rumble
    Boom Crackle Flash!
    Will you save me?
    i do not know
    I want to just dissapear and not be in this danger
    and leave this place
    i want you to save me from the storm
    Bring me to a safe place
    were it will be warm and cozy
    I want to stay in your arms until it is over
    feel your warmth around me
    I can see your warm smile
    Your smile makes the storm go away
    and makes me feel safe
    With you i know everything will be okay
    theres nothing to worry about
    I know you will keep me safe
    I just know.

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    jerseycrtz commented on Thunder Storm

    06-12-2010

    I love it! Did i help write this? It sounds familiar but idk if I wrote some or if I wa watching.
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