The Love Lives On

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  • Forgiveness

    The Love Lives On
    The passion is gone;
    it fades, it flies.

    The heart will fail;
    it bleeds, it dies.

    The soul holds on
    from all those lies.

    The tears will fall;
    so long she cries.

    The hope remains
    inside her eyes.

    The love lives on
    after all those tries.

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    redbloodink commented on The Love Lives On

    06-05-2010

    Love is a funny thing and love is a great thing........ Love is more than a feeling or an emotion.......... hope faith and love is the greater nice write....... red
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    kdarcy commented on The Love Lives On

    05-06-2009

    Yes, I agree with the other comments. Nice read and so true
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    commonreactor commented on The Love Lives On

    04-28-2009

    the simplicity makes it what it is. really liked it
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    mrsbsy commented on The Love Lives On

    03-05-2009

    I like it very much
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    bandit1192 commented on The Love Lives On

    03-02-2009

    Just kind of browsing and found your poem. very nice. short and sweet, but very well written. TS
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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