The Nine

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    The Nine

    The "Nine" stand strong in my mind
    All of them in their place and time.
    One was lonely all the time. She Had 
    been forgotten by time.
    The Second one was angry had to have her
    own. But time has a way to take what was owed.
    Third one was giving she left nothing for herself
    Her hand rocked many a cradle but not for herself.
    The Fourth worked hard left no time to rest.
    Her family was all that mattered she gave nothing
    but the best.
    Five was very serious and often thought of only herself
    Her life was empty like the glasses on the kitchen shelf.
    Six had to stand out on his own. Often he was away
    and never called home.
    Seven was all forgiving. Tried to make peace between
    all. Her life was the richest as she gave to one and all.
    Eight took to flights of fancy. Not restraints did she allow
    Freedom from all rules hanging out with the crowd.
    Number Nine was off to roam. He never had a true place 
    to call his own. He set out to see the world with no regard
    for others pain. Now he sits there sadly with nobody to blame.
     

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    heavenlymayday commented on The Nine

    09-08-2009

    Siblings? That's the impression I get at least. I like the flow of this, nicely done :D

    snowfire

    09/09/2009

    Thank you so much

    snowfire

    09/09/2009

    The poem is about siblings. They are my aunts and uncles

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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